THANK YOU! I almost didn't post it (It's been sitting here for a week and a half on my computer) because I wasn't sure it worked, so it means a lot, coming from someone who knows the characters!! I was so nervous about getting details totally wrong.

I've got another fic with the two of them set in one of the camps I wanted to write first, but this one tumbled out ahead of it. Thanks so much for the feedback and kind, reassuring words!