"It’s been four days and Sam’s cold has only gotten worse, not better." This is a good sentence. :)
"He lets out a heavy sigh as he collapses into the chair across from Dean and leans forward to rest his head against the tabletop." gahh. Sam <3
This is super believable dialogue, and I love it: “Are you feeling any better than yesterday?” Dean asks, pretty sure he knows what the answer is going to be. “Ndo.” <3 <3 Oh, boys.
Also, the end is poifect. Loved this fic from start to finish!
Re: Fill: Biserable (3/3)
A few favorite bits:
"It’s been four days and Sam’s cold has only gotten worse, not better." This is a good sentence. :)
"He lets out a heavy sigh as he collapses into the chair across from Dean and leans forward to rest his head against the tabletop." gahh. Sam <3
This is super believable dialogue, and I love it: “Are you feeling any better than yesterday?” Dean asks, pretty sure he knows what the answer is going to be.
“Ndo.”
<3 <3 Oh, boys.
Also, the end is poifect. Loved this fic from start to finish!