Sooo I have no idea how to leave feedback for this. That was deliciously dirty and so fucking hot in a very unexpected way. And, at the same time, it was amazingly sweet.
His mortification at every stage--sneezing, berating himself for not having taken precautions, being seen like this in front of a crowd, being seen both sneezing and masturbating by someone he is attracted to, being unable to control his desires because the fit is so intense... my gods, it's UNBELIEVABLY GOOD. Because even though he is mortified, there's not a damn thing he can do about it. He's entirely helpless. And the result is to die for.
Loved: * The fanboyish art appreciation and that desire to say the right thing ("Intense." Bless.) * The predictable, inevitable double-sneezes. So adorable. I love predictable sneezes. One sneeze is good, but KNOWING another is coming is the best because then you are aware and can really appreciate it when it finally hits. And the spellings were phenomenal as well. * That "Are you all right? I was joking, but are you actually allergic?" line * Lending a handkerchief (that, yeah, will have to be burnt now LOL) and Lir rescuing Quetzal multiple times * The concerned "Honey?" just slipping out * The mess (it's so wrong and so delightful; I'm officially a terrible human being) * See comment above about the slipping the cool, wet handkerchief under his silks and around his hot cock because that is what killed me. What an image! You're amazing. * Realizing Lir is STILL IN THE COURTYARD and Lir just IMMEDIATELY jumping into the sweetest, most reassuring mode ever. * There was sooo much from Quetzal's POV that I was taken off guard when it switched and we got to see inside Lir's mind. And I was just as pleased to be there. Oh, babes. They're so hot and so sweet and precious at the same time. Which shouldn't be possible, but you've written the impossible. * That magic, last paragraph of warm & fuzzy
Just, yeah. Fucking hot. And so sweet. Wow. Thanks for writing this!
Re: Exhibit, original, M/M, NSFW, bird people (not furry/anthro)
His mortification at every stage--sneezing, berating himself for not having taken precautions, being seen like this in front of a crowd, being seen both sneezing and masturbating by someone he is attracted to, being unable to control his desires because the fit is so intense... my gods, it's UNBELIEVABLY GOOD. Because even though he is mortified, there's not a damn thing he can do about it. He's entirely helpless. And the result is to die for.
Loved:
* The fanboyish art appreciation and that desire to say the right thing ("Intense." Bless.)
* The predictable, inevitable double-sneezes. So adorable. I love predictable sneezes. One sneeze is good, but KNOWING another is coming is the best because then you are aware and can really appreciate it when it finally hits. And the spellings were phenomenal as well.
* That "Are you all right? I was joking, but are you actually allergic?" line
* Lending a handkerchief (that, yeah, will have to be burnt now LOL) and Lir rescuing Quetzal multiple times
* The concerned "Honey?" just slipping out
* The mess (it's so wrong and so delightful; I'm officially a terrible human being)
* See comment above about the slipping the cool, wet handkerchief under his silks and around his hot cock because that is what killed me. What an image! You're amazing.
* Realizing Lir is STILL IN THE COURTYARD and Lir just IMMEDIATELY jumping into the sweetest, most reassuring mode ever.
* There was sooo much from Quetzal's POV that I was taken off guard when it switched and we got to see inside Lir's mind. And I was just as pleased to be there. Oh, babes. They're so hot and so sweet and precious at the same time. Which shouldn't be possible, but you've written the impossible.
* That magic, last paragraph of warm & fuzzy
Just, yeah. Fucking hot. And so sweet. Wow. Thanks for writing this!