That was great! I don't know the fandom either, but the screen caps helped. A lot. I used to figure that if I didn't know the fandom, reviewing wouldn't really help anyone, but I figured that I should at least tell you how much I liked it, unfortunately, no real constructive crit. lol.
It was really adorable, I love how you track a character's first inkling of an illness, to the full blown thing. It makes the story more effective, in my eyes. And the falling asleep on the couch, is always such a cute image as well!
I thought that i was getting a hang of all the characters, but then they said something about when somone was at a monastary, and I got a little lost there again. Heh.
It was indeed very cute tho, an excellent ficlet!
~A