12in12: Day 10 for rainbowbluebird

[tarotgal]

Title: Day 10
Author: tarotgal
Fandom: Torchwood
Rating: NC-17
Pairing: Ianto/Jack
Summary: Jack’s sneezing is dangerous.
Note: Part of the 12 Ficlets in 12 Days project 2011-2012. Requested by rainbowbluebird

Series: http://tgsrealm.beastlet.com/stories/12Ficlets12Days-2011/index.html

Sorry it's so long until we get to the sneezing--plot got in the way! Darn that plot. LOL I hope you like this! Thanks for being so awesome and supportive. I hope your 2012 is full of wonderful moments!

Comments

[rainbowbluebird.livejournal.com]

Oh.My.God. That was so gloriously hot and humorous all at once.
Every moment of it was wonderful **hugs**

My favorite moments:

Ianto was sure that as long as he lived, he would never forget the sound of Jack’s first sneeze. It was soft, insanely wet, and unpredictably high-pitched. “et-Chiiiii!”

-Loved this...I could totally picture Jack sneezing this way

Followed immediately by:
He couldn’t help but notice the look in Jack’s eyes. It wasn’t an emotion he saw there—it was a fever.
**squees** I'm such a sadist...but I loved this too.

And
“Sneeze again,” Ianto pleaded. “Please…”
“Wod’t be a… ihhh… a broblem…” He barely had time to ask before another sneeze built. “heh…ihhh-IHtchhhh!”

Gah...so naughty, nummy, and oh-so Jack.

And the final sneeze and its consequences? I laughed so much...a perfect ending. Just perfect.

Thank you again for doing this. I hope you and your family have a Happy New Year :)

~BVB

[ladykorana.livejournal.com]

Just wanted to let you know I thorougly enjoyed this one! Score another one for the stealthy teaboy! Very clever concept, and nice yummy ending! :)