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tarotgal ([personal profile] tarotgal) wrote2015-12-27 09:00 pm
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Day 3 Fic for smokeycat_430



Title: Day 3
Author: tarotgal
Fandom: Marvel (S.H.I.E.L.D.?)
Rating: PG
Pairing: Clint/Coulson
Disclaimer: Not my characters. I wish they were mine. I definitely don’t get paid for this.
Summary: Agents Barton and Coulson work a case at a hockey rink
Notes: Written during my 12 Ficlets in 12 Days in 2015 project for [livejournal.com profile] smokeycat_430

Link: http://tgsrealm.tarotgal.net/stories/12Ficlets12Days-2015/12in12Day3.html

Whole series: http://tgsrealm.tarotgal.net/stories/12Ficlets12Days-2015/index.html

This was fun to write, even if it didn't turn out exactly as I'd envisioned. A chance to combine my boys with hockey? Yes, please! I hope that you like it :-)
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[identity profile] smokeycat-430.livejournal.com 2015-12-29 02:29 am (UTC)(link)
Aww! I love this so much! You did such a great job mixing hockey into the Marvel world and I'm glad that you had fun writing it and indulging me a little. :-) Thank you for that.

I enjoyed reading every bit of this but there were a few parts that stand out to me as my favorite:

-The image of Clint dressed as a goalie with the mask on to hide his face and then having to sneeze and sniffle behind it. Aww! I guess it was for the best in the end that he was a goalie and had all the pads, too. That, and the part where all the hockey players are thanking Clint with pats like he was their teammate. Aw!

-Knowing Coulson's sneezing patterns far too well by now, he held off saying anything until he was sure there wouldn't be more. Oh, God, yes! Just this one sentence says so much about them.

-The whole idea of the trigger for the sleeper murderer being the Kiss Cam -- brilliant. You are so clever!

-The fact that Clint thought of the idea of him and Coulson scuffling like hockey players when taking his gear off. Uh, yes. I like that image, too.

-All the times Clint and Coulson talked each other through the mission and checked on each other to make sure the other was doing all right. You write this stuff so well I just melt.

-And finally, all around stuffy-talk, and cuddling, and the guys leaning on one another both physically and figuratively. Guh, I loved all of it!

Thank you, thank you, thank you for writing this for me!

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