Under House Arrest continued

[tarotgal]

Forced myself to finish the next chapter in Under House Arrest last night. I'm having trouble with sleep lately... I don't know what's wrong with me. Maybe I should take lessons from my cat or something...

Anyhoo, I had wanted to get feedback on part 16... there have been a few hints as to something that happens in chapter 17 and I just wanted to see if anyone picked up on them... which I'm assuming they did because it's not so creative a thing and the hints are pretty blatant.
I know people have a WHOLE lot better things to do than review a short section of a story that just won't end, though, so no worries. I'll just enjoy finishing it up, then.

I've got a terrible, terrible feeling a 'Tracker' fic is going to pop out of my head amidst my many already unfinished fics... but really, they just walked right into it in the episode I saw *G* And a valid excuse to make Adrian Paul sneeze... I just don't think I'll be able to deny that for very long *G*

Comments

[magictoes11.livejournal.com]

Ha ha! Poor Sirius! I was waiting for something like this to happen... I did have a passing thought when I read part 16 that it sounded as if Sirius was getting sick. Unfortunately, I didn't get the chance to review (I've been stuck at a friend's house for the past couple of days thanks to a recent ice storm, with only a bit of computer access.).

Something tells me poor Lily is going to be stuck with four sick (or injured) boys on her hands by the end of it all... So when are you pushing Peter off a cliff? *winks*

Another great chapter, Tarotgal! Looking forward to how it all turns out.

[tarotgal]

No worries at all :-) Just didn't want to keep boring people with this story that just won't end itself.

But I'm quite glad you liked it. YAY! :-)
And the thought of them all getting sick did indeed cross my mind... but after Remus' ordeal I don't think I could do that to the poor lad. But Peter being pushed off a cliff... interesting thought... hrmmmmm.... *G*

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[magictoes11.livejournal.com]

I can't speak for everyone, but you're far from boring me! It's a very sweet story, with a great mix of smarm, fluff, and of course sneezes.

Hmm. On second thought, I think pushing Peter off a cliff is too quick. Maybe a slow consumption by flesh-eating slugs... Mean ol' Peter. I wonder if JKR realizes what she created among the fan community when she set him up as the final betrayer of MPP/L... ;)

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[tarotgal]

I'm so glad. There are so many other stories I'm working on right now that I *would* like this story to finish... but I don't know exactly what will be going on in the next few sections. So it will be an interesting surprise for me as well.

As for Peter- I'm sure she knew he'd be disliked, but probably not to the 'flesh-eating slugs' extent of hatred. LOL! I've been listening to the third book on tape with my boyfriend, and yesterday he managed to say "Awww! Poor little Scabbers!" at least ten times. I just nodded and tried not to reveal anything. Um. Yeah. Poor Scabbers. *GROWL* *HISS*