LotR snag

[tarotgal]

Growl. OK, so I'm going to take much longer with the story. The language is killing me- it's beautiful, yes, I just suck at them and am having trouble finding nice authentic sources with phrases and vocabulary I need. No worries... it'll just be a while. I was a bit frustrated a while ago, but am much calmer now and am confident that by the tenth or eleventh rewrite this will be a decent story. :-)