tarotgal

heehee thanks :-) I know what you mean about reading/reviewing in fandoms you don't know. I always feel a little strange doing that. But it is nice to know you liked it, for what you could understand.

Yeah, Robin has a craft power to light things on fire- she studied in a monastery to help refine her power(and, er, not hurt anyone and all that) She "recently" got transfered to Japan where she works with Amon hunting witches, which is where the series starts. So I was just pulling out a little of her background when I had her start thinking :-)

Glad you found the screen caps helpful, too. I thought they might be. Especially in their physical descriptions and all. hehee

I'm not sure what I like better, the slow build-up to the illness or just jumping right in there. I think it has to do with plot, really, but sometimes I feel impatient when it's too slowly built. And other times I enjoy stories much more when it is. But I'm glad you found this approach worked well for this story.

Thanks again, your comments *were* helpful :-)