tarotgal

*SQUEEEEEEEEEEEEE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!* (jumps up and down, does a happy dance and gives tg tons of hugs)

I LOVE it!!! The leaves and the banter and him giving her his coat (I Adore that) *squee*. And him trying to hide it and her caring about him and being jealous of the other girl but not being able to admit it. And even the type of sneezes- it just Totally seemed Gilbert type (if that makes Any sense).

And I loved the line about how he didn't seem to realize that she could still see him out of the corner of her eye- just like the leaves. And I loved how you interwove the theme of falling- with falling in love and the leaves falling. The seasonal ties surrounded the story so well, it was just beautiful.

I am sure that there are tons of other things that I am missing but I just Sooooo wanted to let you know how much I adored this and that I am so very, very, very happy with this. Thank you Ever so much!

*happy camper*
tma