X-Men story
Jun. 20th, 2003 03:34 am![[personal profile]](https://www.dreamwidth.org/img/silk/identity/user.png){kind=small}
tarotgalJust posted the first chapter of my X-Men story 'Unexpected Adventures' (which, mind, must be the stupidest title in the world- I spent a total of 20 seconds on that one) on sneezefic.
It follows a Nightcrawler, Iceman, Cyclops, Beast pattern for each chapter... which covers a lot of ground but gets predictable, I hope. I just couldn't stick with one POV, I'm afraid. Not with so many cute boys to play with! I'm currently finished with my Kurt/Logan section which is meant to be non slashy but could TOTALLY be taken either way. Working on my Rogue/Bobby one now :-) Yay! Tis nice to post. Hopefully feedback will help... I rushed through editing quickly, so there are probably TONS of errors I didn't catch. But I'd love thoughts about where people see it going and how they feel about it, etc. Hopefully, no one is too confused at the jumping. I tried to make it obvious.
It follows a Nightcrawler, Iceman, Cyclops, Beast pattern for each chapter... which covers a lot of ground but gets predictable, I hope. I just couldn't stick with one POV, I'm afraid. Not with so many cute boys to play with! I'm currently finished with my Kurt/Logan section which is meant to be non slashy but could TOTALLY be taken either way. Working on my Rogue/Bobby one now :-) Yay! Tis nice to post. Hopefully feedback will help... I rushed through editing quickly, so there are probably TONS of errors I didn't catch. But I'd love thoughts about where people see it going and how they feel about it, etc. Hopefully, no one is too confused at the jumping. I tried to make it obvious.
