tarotgal

So my favorite part of this chapter is where Clint calls Phil to tell him he thinks he's dying. And then the thing that calms Clint down is Phil telling him to blow his nose and tell him he's going to be all right. The best. I read that part several times now. Yeah, my favorite.

Not to mention the part where Clint asks Phil if it's a direct order for him to rest and get better. Aw! And Clint seems to really want to have dinner with Phil. Of course.

Also, for some reason after I read the first chapter I thought the mysterious device was a lot bigger than it was. I remember thinking about how Phil managed to carry it around because I just imagined it being bigger than it was. LOL I don't know, I also kinda imagined it being kinda like a Tesla coil or one of those plasma crystal ball things. I have no idea why I thought that.

I'm happy to see you introduced Fitz and Simmons. Both of them really annoyed me at the beginning of the series then Simmons got better and I like her but Fitz...ehh...The writers really did his character a disservice when the decided to have him stutter so much. I mean I know why he does it but they really need to stop. You seem to be adding more members of the team so I have a feeling the others will be popping up soon. :-)