DRABBLE: 51. Lonely

[tarotgal]

1.Allergic 2.Desperation 3.Cat 4.Summer 5.Itch 6.Light 7.Hands 8.Fever 9.Finally Alone 10.Worried 11.Broody 12.Loud 13.Grass 14.Genetics 15.Control 16.Dinner for Three 17.Doctor 18.Dust 19.Feather 20.Anticipation 21.Bed 22.Drugs 23.First Time 24.Headache 25.Handkerchief 26.Dog 27.Garden 28.Hoarse 29.Kink 30.Scent 31.Hold Back 32.Double 33.Harsh 34.Smoke 35.Making Dinner 36.Impatience 37.Incense 38.Horses 39.Pillow 40.Suffer 41.Nervous 42.Stare 43.Contagious 44.Relief 45.Temperature 46.Terrible 47.Wool 48.Tissues 49.Tease 50.Quarrel 51.Lonely 52.Snuggle 53.Asleep 54.Waiting 55.Frost 56.Rest 57.Flu 58.Phone Call 59.Apologize 60.Sore 61.Accent 62.Fur 63.Haze 64.Spices 65.Under the Weather 66.Stifle 67.Frustrated 68.Caught in the Act 69.Attack 70.Listless 71.Pressure 72.Muffled 73.Annoy 74.Humiliated 75.Disproportionate 76.Bath 77.Spring 78.Message 79.Headcold 80.Clinic 81.Confess 82.Tears 83.Dream 84.Polite 85.Sniff 86.Shower 87.Induce 88.Jealousy 89.Pills 90.Interrupt 91.Chill 92.Office 93.Remedy 94.Weird 95.Soft 96.Purr 97.Honey 98.Defeat 99.Smother 100.Gratitude



51. Lonely
(Supernatural, Dean)

“ehhhh-eh-KTDSchhhh!”

He would not call Sam. That was his only rule.

“ehhhhhhhGTSchhh!”

No matter how horrible he felt, no matter how run down he was, no matter how desperately lonely he admitted to being, he would not call his little brother. Sam ran out on them. And Dean wanted Sam to be happy.

“ehh-Gihschhh!”

But, damn, he wanted to complain to someone that he felt like death warmed over. He wanted someone to say he’d be all right.

“ehhh-Hehktchhhh!”

Rules were meant to be broken. Dean dialed.

“Dean?” Sam’s voice was full of confusion and worry. Dean hung up immediately.

Comments

[flailbabyflail.livejournal.com]

Ahhhh, Dean feeling sick and miserable but trying not to call Sam. Because Sam left them, and Sam deserves to be HAPPY. My poor heart ;_; This is great.

Omg, you've done over 50 of these, you are amazing!! :D

[tarotgal]

Thanks. There was originally a little more of a transition there to explain that big jump between the Sam left and the Sam should be happy lines, but I had to cut/reword to get it to fit in 100 words. Am glad it still read well. Poor, abandoned Dean is sooo pitiful. I absolutely had to torture him a little more. Poor baby.

I've been writing them out of order, though posting in order. I'm stuck on "Listless" right now (have been stuck for more than a week now). I've actually only got about 18 left to write! I'm very excited about that! I want to get them written before April, even if it will take a few more months to post them all.