Storytelling finished

[tarotgal]

Finished editing and posting 'Storytelling' which I think turned out cutely. I hope it's a fun read. After 'Under House Arrest' I needed some HP fluff. And I've been wanting to write a story like that for a while :-)

I think I'm going to redo the end of my Snape vid... I'm really unhappy with the abrupt ending... Sevy deserves more :-) And I forgot to use an image that fits the song better... I just need to figure out where to place the existing image *G* Fun fun this is!

Comments

[magictoes11.livejournal.com]

Very cool story, Tarotgal! Little something for everyone, neh? I loved how you mixed in the cuteness and the fluff with the lovely R/S smarmyness. Plus both cold and allergy sneezing... I was wondering why Sirius was still going at it after the Pepperup potion.

One thing that confused me, though, that I can't remember if you addressed or not... Why was Sirius turning into a dog? Was that part of his plan to deliberately turn into Padfoot? Or was it something beyond his control as he was sneezing? Forgive me if you explained that bit, and I missed it. :)

Also, did you finish 'Under House Arrest'? Man, I'm a confused little bunny today...

[tarotgal]

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<<Little something for everyone, neh? I loved how you mixed in the cuteness and the fluff with the lovely R/S smarmyness. Plus both cold and allergy sneezing... I was wondering why Sirius was still going at it after the Pepperup potion.>>
Heehee! I'm so glad you enjoyed it! And yep, the little devil... I figured I'd give him a good reason to be sneezing... I always think real sneezes are much sexier than faked ones, so I wanted his to be good and real. When he and James discussed his allergy to the feathers in 'Under House Arrest' I yelled "that's it!" and threw it into the plot here. :-)

As for the dog thing- I'm SO sorry. I didn't mean to confuse you. Yeah, Remus mentions his transformations and refers to them as a brilliant idea. He's a good faker, that's all. It was his attempt at delaying a trip down to Madam Pomfrey's for as long as possible. If he took the potion early in the day and was entirely healed, he'd still probably have to go on the trip. He tried fainting, but they still wanted to go get the school nurse, so he pretended to be transforming involuntarily. And that held the nurse off for much longer.
Actually, I stole this concept from my HP fic 'Journeying' wherein Sirius DOES inadvertantly transform when he sneezes... which is quite dangerous as he's on the run at the time, so to speak. I dunno if you read it. I dunno if anyone read it. I don't know that I got any responses on it.. maybe one... twas a long time ago, though. I don't remember.

And no, I didn't actually finish 'Under House Arrest' I just meant it was a nice difference from writing it, as it's got some more serious issues in it (obviously) and this was much more fluffy. I've still got quite a ways to go in UHA :-) Whoa... that's weird... I used to be in a club at college named UHA. heehee

Anyhoo, thanks for the comments!!!!!!!!!!! *hugs*