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That short Obi ficlet I started a little while ago:

Title: Morning Allergy
Author: tarotgal
Fandom: Star Wars
Rating: PG
Pairing: Obi/Qui
Disclaimer: This is just a fanfic. Nothing more. And I get nothing from it aside from possibly feedback
Summary: Obi-Wan has a morning allergy. Hence the title. Qui-Gon helps wait it out.
Notes: It was a Qui sneezing bunny that first caught my attention, but I convinced the muses to let me do Obi so long as it got to be from Qui’s pov.

Morning Allergy

Every morning spent on this planet had started just like this one. Every morning I’d wake to the bed shaking and look over to see Obi-Wan’s back were he sat on the edge of the bed. I sensed that it was getting late and I should be up. I yawned to shake off my sleepiness and reached up to place a warm hand on his cooled back.

He looked back over his shoulder, his eyes squinting a bit, but the rest of his face wearing a broad smile. I always loved the way he smiles at me in the mornings, so glad to see me awake and by his side. There is always a warm surge of the force between us, welcoming and eager. The best part of my going to sleep is surely waking in the morning to him. But his smile now faded quickly, turning into a frown, and his eyes closed completely. He turned his head away from me and he fell forward with a sneeze. “hehChii!”

I rubbed my hand up and down his back and sat up beside him. I could tell he was not all right, so there was no use in inquiring about his condition. “Good morning, Love.” Every morning on this planet had started the same way because Obi-Wan seemed allergic to something in the air here. Obi-Wan devised that it was something that was only out at night, as he had the hardest times in the mornings and evenings. However, I suspect that he was simply better at hiding the symptoms during the day. In the mornings he was still sleepy and unable to restrain the symptoms. And in the evenings he was exhausted after the day and similarly unable. His allergy attacks always seemed worse in the mornings, however.

“hahhChii! h’CHII!” I rubbed his back some more. He snuffled wetly into a handkerchief and pulled back a little. Then he looked up at me, cupping the hanky to his face. His voice muffled through the cloth, “I’m trying to sneeze it all out now.” He blew his nose and lowered the handkerchief to his lap.

I understood, of course. It was the same every morning. And I could tell he’d been sneezing for a while already this morning. The tip of his nose was pink, and there was a crease in the bridge that showed he’d been rubbing at it for a long period of time. I reached up and traced it with the tip of my finger.

Obi-Wan gasped and pulled back, raising the handkerchief. He chuckled a little and shook his head. “That made… nose tickle… now…” He took a deep breath and buried his face into the hanky. “hahh… hah-ahhhhh…” With each breath in his shoulders and the rest of his body rose a bit. With each breath out, he sunk a bit. It almost looked as though he was bouncing in place. “huhh… huh-uhhhhh…” I could tell he was having difficulty with this sneeze.

I stroked his nose again gently, letting the force flow from my fingers into him, tingling his nose just a little bit. He shuddered and reached over, gripping my thigh to steady himself as the urge to sneeze filled him. “huhhhhh… hahhh-CHIH! huhChii! huhCHIE!”

“Blessings.” I stroked his head gently, the soft buzzed hair tickling my palm. “You sound extra sneezy this morning. Usually most of the sneezes are out before I’m roused from sleep.”

Obi-Wan nodded, open-mouthed. Another sneeze was clearly on its way. From his eyes, I could tell he was tired of it all. The energy required to sneeze so much was considerable, and in short supply so early in the morning and before breakfast. He began bouncing in place again as quick, shallow breaths seized him. I wrapped my arm around his back and squeezed him for moral support.

After folding the handkerchief, he held the different spot on it to the lower half of his face. “huhhh… huh-hehhhh… hihhhh…” He breathed as the sneeze built, filling his nose, his whole body. His nose wrinkled and his nostrils twitched. I held him tightly to steady him. “hihhhh… hih-UHH-Chiii! Huh-Chii!” His nose wrinkled again as he sniffed hard and rubbed at his runny nose. He did not apologize, but the look in his eyes said it all, and I gave him another squeeze. He shook his head and weakly rested it on my shoulder. “Extra sneezy,” he muttered softly.

If he continued this way for much longer, I would seriously need to consider telling him to stay home for the day. It would be difficult handling the delegations without him, but too many problems had arisen in the past from Obi-Wan sneezing during important missions. I could not risk anything of the sort happening again when it was so preventable. It was simply our misfortune that we had been sent to a planet that irritated my padawan learner’s sensitive nose.

“hehh…” Far too soon after his last bout of sneezing, Obi-Wan seemed to need to do so again. “hahhh…” Both his hands clutched his handkerchief, which I was sure must be quite used by that point. I started to get up to find him another, but the look he shot me glued me to my seat. He leaned into my side and I tightened my hold around him. “huhhhhhh…” He tensed up expectantly. But then he relaxed with a sigh and rubbed the handkerchief at his nose. “It’s being stubborn. Knows it’s getting late.”

“It’s not late,” I reassured him. It was, in fact. But he did not need the extra stress.

“It… it is…” Obi-Wan rushed as the tickle returned. He began swaying again. “hehhhh… hah-ahhhh…” He was trying to draw the sneeze out, but it wasn’t having anything to do with him. He sighed deeply and rubbed hard at his nose. “At this rate I’ll never… huhhh… heh-ehhh-EHH—” The urge backed down, and Obi-Wan sighed with frustration.

I snuggled closer to him and kissed his ear. Then I whispered warmly into it, “Let me help, Padawan mine.”

Reluctantly, Obi-Wan nodded and slowly dropped all of his shields. I closed my eyes to sense him in a way I had not in years. I waited for the sneeze to build in him again, helping him channel his impatience and frustration away and accept that this was one of the many things he could not control to his liking. He finally closed his eyes as well and sent me a warm appreciative vibe through our bond.

Then his breath caught and he frowned. Obi-Wan pulled back. “hehhh… hah-ahhhhh…” I leaned over and kissed the bridge of his nose softly. He tensed against my touch and took in a deep breath. Quickly, I moved out of the way. “hehh-heh-CHII!” he sneezed finally. “yeh-CHI! Heh-Chiii! Heh-Chie! Sniff!” He rubbed his nose into the hanky wet a series of terribly wet sniffles. Then he yawned weakly into it.

“Padawan,” I sighed. “Being on this planet so long is taking a toll on your sinuses. Maybe you really should consider staying in bed today and resting.”

“Doe,” he shook his head and sniffled again. “No. It will pass. It always… huh… it always does… huhh…” He gave a shudder at the intensity of the urge, and so I pulled him close against me.

With his head against my chest, he grabbed a fistful of my sleep shirt with his free hand, holding his handkerchief to his face with his other. With my arm around him, I gave him a good, tight squeeze to let him know he could sneeze all he needed and I would keep hold of him. “It is all right, my Obi. Just sneeze it out.”

Burying his face into my chest, he did just that. “ehhChii! hehhhChuhh!” he sneezed, and I held him more tightly as he shook. “hehhChii! hehChie! Ehhh-hehChii! Kchii! Kchiii! Hep-Chiii! Hehh… hehh-EHHChiii!” He gave it a moment, to be sure the fit had passed completely, then he pulled away from me and blew heavily into his handkerchief once. He folded the cloth and gave another strong blow. Then he lifted his head part way and spoke softly. “How many more mornings have we got here?”

My heart sank with sympathy for him. “Only three more, if all goes well.” I tried to sound reassuring. “But if more arguments arise and if it looks as though we shall need to stay longer than five days, I will arrange transport for you to leave.”

Despite the great relief I could feel flowing out of Obi into the force, Obi-Wan shook his head. “I will not leave until our mission has been completed.” Another harsh blow of his nose begged to differ. “After a get the sneezes out I feel fine,” he insisted.

Then, realizing I could tell he was certainly not fine, he quickly raised some of his shields back up. It didn’t help prevent another sneeze from striking, however. “hehhCHII!” he sneezed, then rubbed his palm against his nose to get rid of any more tickles.

I lifted an eyebrow, eyeing him suspiciously. “This is you feeling fine?”

He sniffed and took a few clear, slow breaths. “I only require a shower to shake off these last few sneezes. And then I really shall feel fine,” Obi-Wan said with such insistence that I simply could not question him further. “Good morning, to you too,” he answered me finally, and showed me a wide grin.

I melted right on the spot and kissed his happy lips until they dropped their smile and kissed back. Then I hurried him off to the shower and gathered our clothing for the day. It was getting late.


:-)

Yummy! ^-^

Date: 2004-09-25 06:04 pm (UTC)
From: (Anonymous)
Your stories are always so yummy!
Ah, a sneezy Obi-wan in the morining.
I wouldn't mind waking up to that myself! ^-^

Anyways keep up the great work, and I can't wait to read your new Gravi-fic. ^-^


Maki ^-^

Date: 2004-09-25 11:51 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] ladykorana.livejournal.com
Oh, such a lovely fic...poor sweet Obi. And the extra sneezy variety, just the way I like my Padawans! *gives him extra cuddles for his extra sneeziness*

Qui is so nice and attentive here, and very perceptive to the needs and feelings of his student. I love that Obi's so determined enough to last out his time there, despite personal suffering...very in character, IMHO. I also loved that line 'This is you feeling fine?'. I can think of a good half-dozen characters right off the top of my head that are targets of large amounts of h/c writers who always protest that they're fine; wish more of them had that question put to them :)

Finally, a personal thank you for the magnificent build-ups...always a special treat for me to read. The yumminess is much apprecitated!

Date: 2004-09-26 05:26 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] ladykorana.livejournal.com
Good grief, I can't seem to spell anything right tonight. I meant 'appreciated'. Sorry!

Date: 2004-09-28 10:17 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] ladykorana.livejournal.com
Ahhh, Ashes...definitely a huge weakness of mine. His wavs have a tendency to make me quite speechless much of the time *G*

Date: 2004-09-26 01:26 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] schtiel.livejournal.com
Though I don't know much about the fandom (*shifty and nervous look*) I did enjoy reading this story. Such awesome build-ups! :D Ahh! I love your stuff! ^.^

Date: 2004-09-26 12:40 pm (UTC)
From: (Anonymous)
Ahh that was so incredibly cute! How I've missed Obi! I love how Qui is so quick to take care of him, it was all soo fluffy, I loved it! Obi's description of his allergies are too cute, and I love how even though he'd love nothing more than to leave the planet, his loyalty is to the mission! My sweet magnanimous obi!
Loved it!!!!!!
~A

Date: 2004-09-26 03:08 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] snowshie.livejournal.com
I'd say something intelligent and give proper feedback, but this is just too cute. So I'm just gonna saw awwwwwwwwww and leave it at that. ;)

Date: 2004-09-26 08:25 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] eowyngreenleaf.livejournal.com
I am officially turned on ;) *gigglefits* I actually got up enough guts to read this, and I loved it! So adorable (i even managed to get through the slash without squicking ;) in fact, I found it quite charming XD) and even though Im not too familiar with Star Wars or it's main characters, I could still visualize Ewan in this situation. XD You've officially given me the boost to watch the movie again ;)

Date: 2004-09-27 06:31 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] eowyngreenleaf.livejournal.com
Ive actually asked my girlfriend if she wouldnt mind lending me her copies of Phantom Menace and Attack of the Clones ;) She's going to lend me PM tonight as long as i get it back to her by Tuesday LOL. actually, I dont even think i watched PM now that I think about it--I may have only watched Attack of the Clones. But yeah, Im definitely going to give both a shot again. :)

and I attempted to read one of your other fics last night too, but I think I'll have to see the movie to understand what's going on lol. It was good in the beginning and im sure it's wonderful towards he end, but im still not too familiar with the Star Wars plot. ill go back and retry when im done watching the movies. ;)

Very excited--may have another fandom!

Date: 2004-09-27 06:37 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] eowyngreenleaf.livejournal.com
hee hee I didnt tell her what really got me turned on enough to want to watch the movies ;) Ewan is a big part of it, but yeah...hee. She might have been a bit disturbed...

Date: 2004-09-26 10:05 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] smokeycat-430.livejournal.com
I read this the other night but ran out of time to comment so I'm a little late but just wanted to say that I loved it as everything else of yours that I read. Very, very cute.

I bought the trilogy on DVD last week when it came out last week and have been watching them and my brother was watching Episode I today so I've definitely been in the mood lately so I thank you for that as well. Yup, very nice once again. Thanks!

Date: 2004-09-27 12:40 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] ladykorana.livejournal.com
**WARNING: Long rant ahead. Ignore if you wish**

I'm so ticked off at Lucas for all the changes he's made, and the numerous poor choices while making the newer trilogy. I know that it's his baby and all the legal rights are in his corner, but it just totally amazes me that a man who had the vision to come up with SW in the first place can no longer see past his own nose to see that his letting CG and kiddie humor take precedence over story and character development is destroying the value and meaning SW once had to many people. The replacement of original glowing Anakin with glowing Hayden Christensen at the end of ROTJ is the last straw for me. What value is there to be a good Jedi if you stay old for all eternity, when you can be young and hot in the afterlife by living a life of evil for decades and then reedeeming yourself at the last minute. And if Anakin was truly dead all these years, then Luke's talk about saving his father was really pointless.

What makes me completely furious, however, and what I don't think he has the moral right to do is to attempt to wipe the OT from existence. It's like colorizing Casablanca and then destroying all the black and white copies. Sure, Spielberg replaced the guns in ET with walkie-talkies, but he included the original version in the same DVD set. The original SW represents a piece of movie and social history that should be preserved for posterity's sake. Refusing to transfer it to a long-lasting medium ensures that some day, that piece of filmmaking history will be lost forever. I feel so very badly for all the people who poured their hearts and souls into the original effects hailed as cutting edge at the time, whose work is being dismissed as crap. And don't get me started on the actors whose performances are being removed without their permission. Lucas didn't even direct 'Jedi', but the director isn't alive to protest any changes, so I guess he loses out too.

I will not be buying these new DVD's. I loved the original SW with all my heart, and I will see Episode 3 because I love Ewan, and because I desperately hope that Lucas can somehow salvage these prequels (which to me were only useful as fodder for Obi-fic). Once I see it though, Lucas will not be getting another cent from me, ever, unless he releases the true Original Trilogy. I can live without SW on DVD...I have my VHS tapes. And when they wear out eventually, I'll be content to watch any of the multiple versions of LOTR readily available for all by a director who cares about his fans.

Date: 2004-09-27 07:55 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] smokeycat-430.livejournal.com
While I own the trilogy on VHS already and could live with out the DVD it's just my technical side that wanted it. The DVD is beautiful, the way they cleaned up the old movies. It's especially visually beautiful after you go to the special features and look at the old trailers from the 70's. From a wanna be movie maker's/film student's standpoint it's gold to watch the restored films even if they did screw with the characters a bit I just love the quality to which they have cleaned them up and of course Lucas has the bucks and team to do that. So it's that, and they also have a ten minute look at the new movie and how they made the lightsaber fight between Obi-Wan and Anakin that's neat as well. ;-)

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