12 Ficlets in 12 Days: Story 4 Posted!

[tarotgal]

Title: Day 4
Author: tarotgal
Fandom: NCIS
Rating: G
Pairing: None
Disclaimer: Not my characters, not my ‘verse. I don’t get paid a cent to play. Please don’t sue and make things worse.
Summary: There are very few people who can out-boss the boss
Note: Part of the 12 Ficlets in 12 Days project 2009-2010. Requested by VaterGrrl

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Comments

[melydia.livejournal.com]

Very cute. :)

[tarotgal]

heehee Thanks for reading! :-)

[tinadp.livejournal.com]

Thanks for this. Very sweet. Sneezy Gibbs, just delicious.

[tinadp.livejournal.com]

I just wanted to post more speific fb now that I have had time to read it again.
The characters were really true. Abby was perfectly Abby and you captured Gibbs too. The little mannerisms, the smirk I could see him. Abby of course would be the one to march over to take care of him, who else would he even let in.
I like your tony and Kate too - they were just there for a minute, but you definitely got them too.
I love the whole Gibbs has never been sick thing being brought in too.
Thanks for this one too!
You really are the best :)

[tarotgal]

Aw, thank you!!! :-) I haven't written much NCIS fic (and it's mostly all been of the Tony/Gibbs persuasion) so it's really great to hear it feels true to the show (I love the show so much; I don't want to do an awful job writing it!)

Oh, you're absolutely right about Abby; he wouldn't willingly open the door to anyone else.

I love the whole Gibbs has never been sick thing being brought in too.
I don't believe for a second that he's never been sick. LOL! He can't fool tarotgal! He's such a fascinating character though. Many, many, many layers.

I like your tony and Kate too - they were just there for a minute, but you definitely got them too.
Thank you! As I knew they wouldn't be in there much, I figured I might as well go the Kate route instead of Ziva. There was such a great dynamic between the two of them and neither was in a position to go track Gibbs down at home so early into the show. Anyhoo, I'm really glad you thought they were in character too!

Thanks for the wonderful feedback! It's so sweet AND helpful! :-) I'm glad you liked it!

[smokeycat-430.livejournal.com]

I agree that this was very cute. I don't really sit down at watch this show but my mom always seems to have it on (or Law & Order which seem to be the USA networks favorite shows sometimes). Anyway, from what I've been able to catch on from watching and what my mom tells me about the show I think you got the characterizations down pretty good.

I was just watching the movie Wyatt Earp last weekend and Mark Harmon has a bit in that so he's been in my mind as of late so it was nice to read a little something about one of this other characters. Good job, I enjoyed it. :-)