12 Ficlets in 12 Days: Story 11 Posted!

[tarotgal]

Title: Day 11
Author: tarotgal
Fandom: Castle
Rating: PG
Pairing: sort of none? ;-)
Disclaimer: Not my characters, not my ‘verse. I don’t get paid a cent to play. Please don’t sue and make things worse.
Summary: Castle has a bit of a cold and he’s pretty sure Beckett has noticed.
Note: Part of the 12 Ficlets in 12 Days project 2009-2010. Written for smokeycat_430

Visit: http://tgsrealm.beastlet.com/stories/12Ficlets12Days/

Comments

[http://users.livejournal.com/_la_mysterieuse/]

This was very cute! Loved the description of the sneezes and the dialogue about sneezing in novels was incredibly cute!

(I never know if it's bad form to comment on a fic before the person who requested it has but if I don't do it now I'll forget!)

[smokeycat-430.livejournal.com]

Yay! This was a very nice surprise to find last night before I went to bed. And after a long day it was nice to come home and read it again.

I also really thought it was cute with Castle telling Beckett all about how important colds can be in character development and relationships. They seem to be drawing their relationship out on the show, that's for sure!

Also, Castle's first line with the "Very cunning" sounded very much like Mal to me which is something I think the writers of Castle try to throw in every once and a while. There are obvious references to Firefly (like the Halloween costume) and more subtle, hidden ones (like a name on Castle's mom's Facebook page said M. Reynolds or something like that).

Anyway, it was adorable and thank you for coming up with something for me that I do, indeed, really like. You are very thoughtful to put up with my indecisiveness. This made me feel special and warm inside. Thanks!