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Title: Day 6
Author: tarotgal
Fandom: Gilmore Girls
Rating: PG
Pairing: Rory/Jess (past Rory/Dean)
Disclaimer: Not my characters. I wish they were mine. I definitely don’t get paid for this.
Summary: There's more than one reason Jess doesn't want to go to the Winter Carnival.
Notes: Written during my 12 Ficlets in 12 Days in 2014 project for symphonyflute

Link: http://tgsrealm.tarotgal.net/stories/12Ficlets12Days-2014/12in12Day6.html

Whole series: http://tgsrealm.tarotgal.net/stories/12Ficlets12Days-2014/index.html

So, this is my first GG fic. The show is so dialogue-heavy that this fic sort of ran away from me in that regard. It jumps around between Jess and Rory and takes place during the 'That'll Do, Pig' episode that I've now watched 4 times over the past two days. LOL It's sort of an alternate version of that episode, though I'm now convinced that Jess does sound a little stuffy when he says some of his lines. heehee I hope you like it! Let me know if something's terrible so that I can avoid that mistake in any future GG fics I may write. I hope you have a fantastic 2015 and that this fic is just the start of it :-)

Date: 2015-01-04 10:30 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] ladykorana.livejournal.com
Perfect ep to set this during! I love Clara, especially in this ep. (Though IMHO it demonstrates how much better Dean and Rory belong together, but I fully admit my biases, lol). I almost felt sorry for Jess. Almost. ;-)

Date: 2015-01-09 06:19 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] symphonyflute.livejournal.com
I never in a million years would have known this as your first GG fic, had I just come in off the street and read it.

Not only was everyone's characterization, your descriptions of the town and the festival were totally in the voice of the show.

Jess' reaction to being sick in Stars Hollow, while dating Rory and dealing with the Dean crap was awesome. And I love the quirk that when he starts sneezing he can't seem to stop.

And I loved Luke (after being really slow on the uptake) insisting on Jess drinking tea, since that's what he suggested to Lorelai early in the series.

I loved it! I have read this at least a dozen times already. Thank you!

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Contents of this journal include: sneeze fetish references and lots of hurt/comfort, short fics and/or WIPS, everything from gen and het to slash and femslash, everything from G to NC-17, random ramblings about my life and fandom obsessions.

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